Daniel, These annotations are a bit lacking in detail and are too short: they are supposed to be 2 paragraphs. Also, are the added parts, in parenthesis, your opinion or that of the authors? Though you should talk about how each text is useful to your research project, you need to refrain from giving your actual opinion on the topic (This is not appropriate for the annotated bib genre). While I like how use chose books for your sources, is the first one even related to space exploration?
Daniel,
ReplyDeleteThese annotations are a bit lacking in detail and are too short: they are supposed to be 2 paragraphs. Also, are the added parts, in parenthesis, your opinion or that of the authors? Though you should talk about how each text is useful to your research project, you need to refrain from giving your actual opinion on the topic (This is not appropriate for the annotated bib genre).
While I like how use chose books for your sources, is the first one even related to space exploration?
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